During the beginning of term 1 Ms Stock spent some time working with us in Room 4. She taught us about character description in writing, especially how to activate nouns. This is YouMic's example:
He has short blondish hair that sticks up in the morning. His eyes are blue mints that roll around at me. He is not much taller than me. He wears a new Peachgrove uniform. But other than that just old clothes. His hot booming voice stinks of rotten egg. That's Jacob.
Such a talented writer.
He has short blondish hair that sticks up in the morning. His eyes are blue mints that roll around at me. He is not much taller than me. He wears a new Peachgrove uniform. But other than that just old clothes. His hot booming voice stinks of rotten egg. That's Jacob.
Such a talented writer.
Awesome description
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